CICERO · DETAIL · 3 ITERATIONS ON THE COMPLETE DESIGN
Old complete Figma design as the base, three iterations layering in genuinely useful new sections: brain context (why this surfaced) · Cicero's pick (one recommended chapter) · insider tips (tactical, not generic) · photo moment (one shot, one angle) · locals' angle (the secret nobody publishes) · time math (does it fit your day?) · verdict (Michelin-style frankness) · right-now availability. All readability bugs fixed — black text on white phones.
Sunset in 22 min. Sant'Ignazio's ceiling pretends to be a sky — best seen with low golden light bleeding through the windows. 7 min walk, you'll be inside right when the light hits.
⊛ Locals know
"Right transept has a small Pozzo overlooked by every guidebook. Most tourists leave without seeing it."
Sunset in 22 min. The ceiling fakes a sky — best in low light. 7 min walk, perfect timing.
⏱ Does it fit?
⊛ Locals know
"Right transept has a small Pozzo overlooked by every guidebook. Nobody photographs it."
⌐ Threads from this place
v3 (full pitch) is closest to the right answer — but the order matters more than the content. Above the fold the user needs to know "should I go" (verdict + brain context + math). Below the fold they need "what to do while I'm there" (chapters · pick · photo · locals). v1 is too sparse; v2 is missing the decision tools. v3 sequences both halves correctly.
Easy iteration from here: trim v3 to 2 of {verdict, math, right-now} (pick the most informative for the moment), and decide if Cicero's Pick lives separately or just as a star on the chapter list (v3 shows both).